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New Form Three by Three

Mon, Dec 26 2011 03:50pm EST 1
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
1776 Posts
This form is a combination of Rubaiyat and a repeated refrain. The pattern is aaa,bbb ccc, bbb ddd, bbb
The syllable count is 8 to 10 per line for even flow.Some have expressed a desire on learning new forms and so each month I will introduce one.Look at the pics and if you want to write in another form or free flow please feel free to do so.
Mon, Dec 26 2011 03:52pm EST 2
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
1776 Posts
An example of a Three by three

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Mon, Dec 26 2011 03:54pm EST 3
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
1776 Posts
here are some pics to inspire you

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Mon, Dec 26 2011 03:55pm EST 4
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
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Mon, Dec 26 2011 03:56pm EST 5
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
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Mon, Dec 26 2011 04:02pm EST 6
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
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Mon, Dec 26 2011 04:04pm EST 7
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
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Mon, Dec 26 2011 05:55pm EST 8
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
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Mon, Dec 26 2011 06:33pm EST 9
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
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Winter's Walk

A Queen in all the Winter snow

Moves gracefully goes with the flow

Her Owl is present this she knows

Each day she takes a little walk

He flutters by she hears his squawk

She wonders what next he will stalk

She's outside now to clear her head

Now knowing she's nothing to dread

Companion for a walk instead

Each day she takes a little walk

He flutters by she hears his squawk

She wonders what next he will stalk

No longer does she feel enmeshed

Her walk has left her so refreshed

Her thoughts and actions have now meshed

Each day she takes a little walk

He flutters by she hears his squawk

She wonders what next he will stalk

Tue, Dec 27 2011 12:55am EST 10
Rebel Coyote
Rebel Coyote
85 Posts
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Tue, Dec 27 2011 09:08am EST 11
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
1776 Posts
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Tue, Dec 27 2011 09:09am EST 12
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
1776 Posts
way to write my writing partner smooth flowing three by three I knew you could easily polish one off. I say you nailed it! clapping
Tue, Dec 27 2011 09:35am EST 13
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
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Tue, Dec 27 2011 09:53am EST 14
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
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Tue, Dec 27 2011 12:21pm EST 15
Michelle King
Michelle King
47 Posts
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Miss January Ice Queen

She is Miss January Ice queen
Taking away all of the green
As temperatures drop at thirteen
She is beautiful but I want spring
When the flowers bloom and birds sing
With the warm sunshine in full swing

Her icy heart sparks with a glow
And her beauty does very much show
In these cold temperatures way below
She is beautiful but I want spring
When the flowers bloom and birds sing
With warm sunshine in full swing

Winter is beautiful but so cold
And cold weather gets very old
I'm ready for warmth to unfold
She is beautiful but I want spring
When the flowers bloom and birds sing
With warm sunshine in full swing


Michelle R. King
12-27-11

Tue, Dec 27 2011 01:22pm EST 16
Rebel Coyote
Rebel Coyote
85 Posts
way to write my writing partner smooth flowing three by three I knew you could easily polish one off. I say you nailed it! clapping

Thanks very much, Lori! I had to try one and wanted to give support to your group. :) hugs

Tue, Dec 27 2011 01:25pm EST 17
Rebel Coyote
Rebel Coyote
85 Posts
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Miss January Ice Queen

She is Miss January Ice queen
Taking away all of the green
As temperatures drop at thirteen
She is beautiful but I want spring
When the flowers bloom and birds sing
With the warm sunshine in full swing

Her icy heart sparks with a glow
And her beauty does very much show
In these cold temperatures way below
She is beautiful but I want spring
When the flowers bloom and birds sing
With warm sunshine in full swing

Winter is beautiful but so cold
And cold weather gets very old
I'm ready for warmth to unfold
She is beautiful but I want spring
When the flowers bloom and birds sing
With warm sunshine in full swing


Michelle R. King
12-27-11

Gourgeous write, Michelle!

Tue, Dec 27 2011 02:18pm EST 18
Michelle King
Michelle King
47 Posts
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Very beautiful, Lori!

Tue, Dec 27 2011 02:20pm EST 19
Michelle King
Michelle King
47 Posts
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Winter's Walk

A Queen in all the Winter snow

Moves gracefully goes with the flow

Her Owl is present this she knows

Each day she takes a little walk

He flutters by she hears his squawk

She wonders what next he will stalk

She's outside now to clear her head

Now knowing she's nothing to dread

Companion for a walk instead

Each day she takes a little walk

He flutters by she hears his squawk

She wonders what next he will stalk

No longer does she feel enmeshed

Her walk has left her so refreshed

Her thoughts and actions have now meshed

Each day she takes a little walk

He flutters by she hears his squawk

She wonders what next he will stalk

I'm enjoying this form... very nice!

Tue, Dec 27 2011 02:22pm EST 20
Michelle King
Michelle King
47 Posts
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Very beautiful, Rebel!

Tue, Dec 27 2011 02:23pm EST 21
Michelle King
Michelle King
47 Posts
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A lovely tribute to a wonderful poet!

Tue, Dec 27 2011 02:26pm EST 22
Michelle King
Michelle King
47 Posts
Thank you for the inspiring form to try out, Lori. I had fun with this!Smile
Tue, Dec 27 2011 02:28pm EST 23
Michelle King
Michelle King
47 Posts
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Miss January Ice Queen

She is Miss January Ice queen
Taking away all of the green
As temperatures drop at thirteen
She is beautiful but I want spring
When the flowers bloom and birds sing
With the warm sunshine in full swing

Her icy heart sparks with a glow
And her beauty does very much show
In these cold temperatures way below
She is beautiful but I want spring
When the flowers bloom and birds sing
With warm sunshine in full swing

Winter is beautiful but so cold
And cold weather gets very old
I'm ready for warmth to unfold
She is beautiful but I want spring
When the flowers bloom and birds sing
With warm sunshine in full swing


Michelle R. King
12-27-11

Gourgeous write, Michelle!

Thank you Rebel! Smile

Tue, Dec 27 2011 02:54pm EST 24
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
1776 Posts
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Miss January Ice Queen

She is Miss January Ice queen
Taking away all of the green
As temperatures drop at thirteen
She is beautiful but I want spring
When the flowers bloom and birds sing
With the warm sunshine in full swing

Her icy heart sparks with a glow
And her beauty does very much show
In these cold temperatures way below
She is beautiful but I want spring
When the flowers bloom and birds sing
With warm sunshine in full swing

Winter is beautiful but so cold
And cold weather gets very old
I'm ready for warmth to unfold
She is beautiful but I want spring
When the flowers bloom and birds sing
With warm sunshine in full swing


Michelle R. King
12-27-11

Tue, Dec 27 2011 02:55pm EST 25
Sonnet Diva
Sonnet Diva
1776 Posts
I so smiled when I saw your Three by three Michelle, thank you as always you delight
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